After viewing some of your gallery, I decided to "offer" a bit of critique... You are great at capturing the musculature of human anatomy, but as you seem fond of big cats might I suggest taking some time to study their heads/faces/expressions a bit more? your drawings are quite good right up to the neck, but then it seems to fall apart. You are obviously not lacking in talent. I would love these if the heads were as good as the bodies, (except for the exaggeration of the breasts and nipples -just doesn't seem fitting to me) This piece in particular could be stunning if the time were taken to re-work it, utilizing your apparent skill throughout.
also... there is something off in the perspective/positioning of the right arm, and if you were to shade it a little darker, I think the depth gained would add to the quality, and maybe fix that percieved perspective problem.
You really do have the ability to do fantastic work. I love the hide textures you use, and the muscles are mind boggling!
BTW I don't think I can do any better, HOWEVER, I think YOU can!
Very good work, but there's quite a bit of detail visible beneath her top piece. Really, there's not much of a difference in nudity and clothes that are so tight that they show every detail. You should really consider marking this as mature.
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also... there is something off in the perspective/positioning of the right arm, and if you were to shade it a little darker, I think the depth gained would add to the quality, and maybe fix that percieved perspective problem.
You really do have the ability to do fantastic work. I love the hide textures you use, and the muscles are mind boggling!
BTW I don't think I can do any better, HOWEVER, I think YOU can!
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